hey LiLi here your review #2
Ok graphics were the same, so keep to my word on that. I do actualy like your style its pretty good. Violance wasent much of it. must admit do like the grouning. as for the interactivity nice preload cntinue button replay button theres ur 3 points there as for humor. yes i actualy laughed! congrads on that one did like the bit at the end. maybe make it a bit longer like maybe he goes.. ok then and then a command pormt props up then get a load of oobly stuff and paste it in the box and make it look confusing and astuff and maybe snake goes, ehh fuck this one. in like an irhs voice :O . there ur review. my things to improve on are the hing t the end and the thing at the start. "That is all, dismissed!" - MG3 TANKER
ok graphics were ok. BUT U NAILED THE HUMOR!!
omg....i ust lvoed it dude, the grpahics where ok but ur humor s right on target and that is wht makes this movie a legand! . he olilolo oh thiing wa random. funny at first but after watching the movie a few times. NO as for . CRAB BATTLE!! hahahaha lmoa how did you think of that#? and ho th crab does bearly anything and snakes beat himself up . but the fucking eyeball lamo!! dude you gotta a true peice of art work here. my advise at th start all those hirrlbe images or rocks and stuff, draw the rocks urself itld be alot better.
LiLi please.....here my review.
ok as for the graphics liam heh! ur men aint that bad. no animating!!! not animating!!! thats apaulin! ok, as for thre sound yes i know its not ur fault being crackly so i took that into concidiration of what you did the ound was very well in tiem and the music was nice and jumpy so good job on that. as for the vioolance, it wasent suppose to be a violant movie. but u cudda had the gaurd shottin the box and load a screams and groans and blood commin outta the back. as for the inteacticily.. no play button. no interactivity humor, in the back of my mind u may have found a tiny glimpse of a smile. il be totally hounest with you. teletubbies makes u laguh more . liam you are a ok movie maker you need to animate more. GOOD JOB ON MOVING AWAY FROM STICK MEN!! FIALLY! so well done! try animating 3d ppl then ull impress me! so for now lili i give u a 11/100 - a short movie, a very short movie no animation sound good and not rushed.
Wow great! This is actually ur first non-criticising review :D Anyway im glad you spotted the bad things in the movie. This is because all of those things you have said are (im admitting it) actually true. But anyway, straight to the point. Ive started again and ive included more talking (better quality) to get the just of the storyline and more animating. There should be some violence if i get around to it. Thanx alot james for this review, it has helped me even more by giving me more will power. Thanks for this non-encouraging post!
umm wll its umm different......
..........umm well its not like umm very good well infact i think its um shit but wayhaay what the heck....
not bad ...not bad atall
not bad make more oi enjoyed it make more please :)
kickass just kickass you gotta try it.
man i hadent played a shotting game until this one it was great some flaws though but i liked the way the people died very enjoyable great :)
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