hey LiLi here your review #2
Ok graphics were the same, so keep to my word on that. I do actualy like your style its pretty good. Violance wasent much of it. must admit do like the grouning. as for the interactivity nice preload cntinue button replay button theres ur 3 points there as for humor. yes i actualy laughed! congrads on that one did like the bit at the end. maybe make it a bit longer like maybe he goes.. ok then and then a command pormt props up then get a load of oobly stuff and paste it in the box and make it look confusing and astuff and maybe snake goes, ehh fuck this one. in like an irhs voice :O . there ur review. my things to improve on are the hing t the end and the thing at the start. "That is all, dismissed!" - MG3 TANKER
ok graphics were ok. BUT U NAILED THE HUMOR!!
omg....i ust lvoed it dude, the grpahics where ok but ur humor s right on target and that is wht makes this movie a legand! . he olilolo oh thiing wa random. funny at first but after watching the movie a few times. NO as for . CRAB BATTLE!! hahahaha lmoa how did you think of that#? and ho th crab does bearly anything and snakes beat himself up . but the fucking eyeball lamo!! dude you gotta a true peice of art work here. my advise at th start all those hirrlbe images or rocks and stuff, draw the rocks urself itld be alot better.
LiLi please.....here my review.
ok as for the graphics liam heh! ur men aint that bad. no animating!!! not animating!!! thats apaulin! ok, as for thre sound yes i know its not ur fault being crackly so i took that into concidiration of what you did the ound was very well in tiem and the music was nice and jumpy so good job on that. as for the vioolance, it wasent suppose to be a violant movie. but u cudda had the gaurd shottin the box and load a screams and groans and blood commin outta the back. as for the inteacticily.. no play button. no interactivity humor, in the back of my mind u may have found a tiny glimpse of a smile. il be totally hounest with you. teletubbies makes u laguh more . liam you are a ok movie maker you need to animate more. GOOD JOB ON MOVING AWAY FROM STICK MEN!! FIALLY! so well done! try animating 3d ppl then ull impress me! so for now lili i give u a 11/100 - a short movie, a very short movie no animation sound good and not rushed.
Wow great! This is actually ur first non-criticising review :D Anyway im glad you spotted the bad things in the movie. This is because all of those things you have said are (im admitting it) actually true. But anyway, straight to the point. Ive started again and ive included more talking (better quality) to get the just of the storyline and more animating. There should be some violence if i get around to it. Thanx alot james for this review, it has helped me even more by giving me more will power. Thanks for this non-encouraging post!
okk kind of puffy
sorry to puffy for my liking kinda gay if u no wat i mean
WOW....U HAVE TALENT
my review, loved the blood great effects, loved the blood, loved the blood great stickmen alright sound, loved the blood
my m8s reveiew kool
well done! nice! ready bellow
well that was gd ur a great artist i luv ur style u got all 5s mate and i dident like that green shit that spoke a screatchy voice nice animation gd background! well done!
well im going to give this a long hard thought....
ok good points:-
1)nice lips times in with voice nicely
2)a point was point across
3)not bad art work
1)i find it quiet offensive being told who to vote for
2)i bet you it took no time atall
3)it's got a score that it shudent have
i give you 2/5 i dont think you put much effort into it
2)I do try go point my points across, yes
3)Four years of college well spent
1)Had to be said. My first cartoon, Black Jellybean, was less specific. I figured selling a particular candidate instead of a point of view would be offputting. But when I saw Ohio in play, I decided I had to make a more direct appeal.
2) Both cartoons together took 2 1/2 days.
3) Move to Joisey, ya bum.
nice one i like your work
stfu all you people who say it has t have a plot some ties wachingrandjm shit flying acrss the scren canbe entertaining andthis iswanna the i voted 5 m8 ilike yr wrk nice mouth expressions and timing with the music is good my fav bit was with the mutant cats lol gd work im will be eagre for your next work :)
well i think that this is a very fast active peice of flash lots of work must have go into this but its was a brilliant set of clay animation to nice tweening espeicaly the rooms that moved round courners i loved the bit with the petrol bombs and when the girl went crazy with her knives great art work there. overall 9.5/10
well i hate the voice of the money its so scratchy
well i must say everything eles was fine just the voices......
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